KOTOR #1, pg 9 redo
This is what we finally ended up with-- a nice big fat shot of the 5 Masters. Notice that Lucien is the only one with a blue saber. The other 4 are Consulars and it was explained to me that they have green sabers. Anyhow, its a much tighter show than the the original page and puts us directly behind Zayne's head-- Hopefully this will have amped up the tension a little and give us a feel of what it's like to have a lightsaber at our necks :)
Also, you'll see that in panel 2 I pull the camera out a little bit and now we can see everyone that needs to be seen. It actually would have made a nice double page spread, and it would have been easy to show all 5 Masters and all 5 Padawans and nice widescreen style shot-- oh well, live and learn.